Description of Pandora, by Liam.
by pandora on Jan.21, 2011, under Literacy
Pandora is an exotic, as the radiant sun begins to fade you can admire the full radiance of its landscape. This land is filled with utter beauty, such as: the mysterious caves, rushing waterfalls which trickle down cliffs with light glimmering of it, tropical (deadly) plants, lucious vines, furthermore ragged rough cliffs. Mystical beasts roam the land lurking in the distance, searching for its prey. These beasts have 2 faces, they are the nice side, also the extremely vicious side. This land is unhabitable to humans, due to its deadly toxic atmosphere.
January 16th, 2012 on 2:41 pm
it is cool how you give it so much deitael
April 3rd, 2011 on 11:14 am
I like the way you used exotic also the radiant sun! Well Done!
Wallop Primary School
March 14th, 2011 on 10:23 am
Dear Liam, I love the word trikle and it is so soft and peaseful you can just see what you wrote in your mind!