Description of Pandora!!!
by pandora on Jan.24, 2011, under Literacy
The world of pandora is a world of mystery, which is planted next to a gas giant surronded by many-a Moons. Pandora has a toxic atmousphere which only allows the navi race to live there. The crystal water dripps down the magnifying waterfall, which towers like a skyscraper.
March 14th, 2011 on 10:34 am
I like when you put mysteary because you did lot’s of difrent word’s you did great adjectives. when did you do it because you did such great work. I wish we could get in touch. I hope you enjoy my coment Bye .
January 24th, 2011 on 9:05 pm
WOW, I like the part where you have wrote about the crystal water.
January 24th, 2011 on 8:52 pm
This is a great piece of descriptive writing John.My favourite phrase is toxic atmosphere!