The world of Pandora.
by pandora on Jan.24, 2011, under Literacy
The world of Pandora is a mythical place with unique animals. Flowers sitting very tranquil waiting to be picked. Many strange things lie beneath the atmostphere of the canopy. Green, blue, red every colour is seen in the world of Pandora. The collasal animals shimmer in the golden sunlight. A huge water fall, trickeling, waiting to reach the bottom. Rivers shimering in the glow of the small shining bugs from up above. Gigantic clouds, fluffy like huge blue candyfloss’. Immense animals flying above what goes on beneath them, like a hawk! The moon like white and blue paint mixed together. There is nothing ugly in Pandora. Cubs of immense animals padding along the huge reeds on the ground. Radiant trees standing tall and proud. Sapphire birds leaping from side to side on the admirable tree’s. The toxic atmosphere is life threating to humas, but yet so habitable.
Ny fern (year 6 )
March 24th, 2011 on 4:29 pm
Well done! I like the way you use lots of powerful languge.My favroite is unique also i love your simile it’s brilliant!
January 28th, 2011 on 11:56 am
Nice writing, however you put ny in stead of my.