Pandora

My Pandora story – By Maryam

by on Feb.06, 2011, under Stuff

It was a frosty morning, while I was sat miserabley in my car, I suddenly found myself on a gigantic cliff, driving wildly. My car swished side to side, on the icey roads. Abruptly, my car slid off the diminutive road, in a unexpected time. Crash! my car landed at the bottom of the humongeous cliff.

I was terrified, to scared to even open my eyes. What had happened to me? I shut my eyes tight, in fear! Finally, I peeped around, with just one eye open. First thing I saw was the gigantic roots, above the trees.  In a hurry, I dashed to my feet. The trees were swaying in the dark breeze, as if they were trying to tell me something. Eventually, I took my first steps, towards a river. The water was crystal clear, just  like glimmering golden jewels.  Furthermore I touched the unique trees and plants. Everything was amazing, the tropical forest was stunning.I had a very queer feeling that someone or something was looking at me. Slowly I turned around.After 2 seconds, my eyes caught a glimpse of a huge fragile claw, which was hanging out of some astrodinary bushes. Snappp!.. A twig just snapped. Now I was sure there was something there. But what was it? Before I could run, I saw some menasing glooming eyes glaring at me. I shivered and shaked, and just thought of an idea. RUNNN! I dashed for my  precious life. Madly jumping in and out of all the radient wildlife. For one single moment, I thought I was a goner.

I stumbled and staggered through the world of Pandora. Behind me was a gigantic creature.  What was  I going to happen to me? Was I going to survive throughout this dangerous world? I wasnt sure about that.

After a while, I found  myself at a edge of a huge mountain. What was I going to do?  For one moment, I thought to jump off. No I would die anyway. I stood there impatient and terrified. The menacing creature was still behind me, but now even closer. Suddenly I grabbed one of the massive roots, and flung across to the other mountain. A diminutive door, I staggered in. Relieved but shocked. Nothing was in this place, just a door. Slowly I creped outside, the dark figure was still there. Waiting for his food. I knew that I will be in this room for a long long time. Hours and hours passed, but the creature was not there anymore. What a relief..

Frantically I darted outside. WOW! Pandora was now night. Astrodinary sights caught my eye. Pandora but now 10 times beautiful.  The glowing rivers shone in the moonlight. It was unbelievable, the trees and plants glimmered in the dark nights. I could hear the roars and wailing of dangerous animals from the distance. I was amazed, but tired!..

I strolled slowly, towards the diminutive bridge. I glared at myself, through the water. I only saw a depressed, isolated face. I only wanted to go home. Home, my home. Suddenly a flash of light came. The bridge shaked and vibrated. Immediately it snapped in half, I tumbled in the water. I struggled to get out..

First thing I saw was me in my messy room, sat on my diminutive bed. IM HOME! I was just about to go and tell my parents what had happened, but surely they would not believe me. Would you if I told you?

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3 Comments for this entry

  • Mrs Skinner

    I don’t think anyone would believe you if you told them this fantastical story! You have really excelled with this piece Maryam! Brill!

  • Raja

    WOW Maryam! The suspense is killing me. I hope you have more on this story, because I want to read on! I hope you write more and more in the future. You have got a talent!
    By Raja.

  • Murron

    Wow!! What i great story. I like the part when you say; Frantically I darted outside. WOW! Pandora was now night. Astrodinary sights caught my eye. Pandora but now 10 times beautiful. The glowing rivers shone in the moonlight. It was unbelievable, the trees and plants glimmered in the dark nights.I like this part because you have described the place at night, i also like how you have said Pandora but now 10 times beautiful it just tells your reader what they are reading and to give them a good picture in their minds. Keep up the good work :D
    By Murron

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