Pandora

Warriors Of Kudlak (By Saleha)

by on Feb.07, 2011, under Literacy

CHAPTER ONE

As the scortching sun was shining on the building, Combat 3000, I (Saleha) was playing a war game inside it. Children had protective armour on with a Sontaran Blaster with one hundred lives. Sprinting here and there, just waitind for clever people to attack, I was waiting for my points of level one. Showing my magnificent points, the talking computer announced, “You are ready for level two now! “Yes! Oh yes! I came first.” I replied, while jumping up and down like a brown kangaroo. With excitement, I dashed into level two of the war game in the colossal Combat 3000. However now, we only had ten lives in the Sontaran Blaster. There was a secret a room, where it led us to the world champion – ship of the war game. As soon as the first person gets inside the secret room, they would have the world champion – ship trophy. When I reached to the secret room, I got trapped between two doors. I panicked. Rapidly, my heart started beating. All of a sudden, there was thrash of lightening, with clouds banging and heavy rain. Brr! What had happened?

CHAPTER TWO

Plip! Plop! Plip! Plop! As the bitter water was dripping down of he leaves, I slowly opened my brown eyes. Gazing at the foggy sky, I stood up. Looking around me, I saw that this moon that I was on was a world of wonder and mystery, which was incredibly dangerous, but has strange beauty. Because of the toxic atmosphere, no human being could live on the moon without special protection. For some reason, as I got here (well how ever I got here), I already had special protection. As the sky was turning bright and the crystal, clear water reached at the end of the waterfall, viscous animals were here and there, sprinting everywhere. Just then, the sky turned misty. The leaves were waiting for the transparent, trickling water to drip off. Whilst life – threatening animals were roaming everywhere, colossal , bumpy trees were stood there silently and alone… Thirsty, ragged roots were looking for salty water to drink. On the other hand, I could see from far away, blue naves were gazing at animals to kill. As well as venture in the tropical rainforest, it looked radiant. This was a monumental world with dangerous beauty!

CHAPTER THREE

Strolling around this world, I heard people chit chattering. Holding my Sontaran Blaster, ready to fight with the victim, I crept nearer and nearer to the mountain which was big as as a tree on earth. I shouted, “Hands up!”           “Now, now! Thank you! I do look handsome, don’t I!” a boy replied. “No! He’s saying to put your ha….. nds up. Hee’s got a gun thing in his hands,” a girl replied back, putting her hands up. Putting my Blaster down, I announced back to everyone, “No, no! It’s all right! I thought you were a victim.” Walking towards everyone, I said, “Hi! My name is Saleha.” “Nice name,” said the boy, “My name is Luke.” The girl replied, “Or and my name is Gen.” Gen said, “Where are we?” I said, “I was playing in Combat 3000, and now I have been teleported here!”     “Wait, wait! Hang on. How do you know that all of us have been teleported here?” asked Luke. Replying back to Luke, I saw a weird thing. Anyway, I said to Luke, “We are obviously teleported. We’ve not flied all this way!” Running everywhere, finding a way to get out, a big alien thing came in front of us. Sssssss! What now…..

CHAPTER FOUR

“Hey! That’s the weird thing that I saw,” I shouted. Staring at the orangey colour alien, I saw that the oval face of his was slimy, with big eyes (big as the earth). wearing a red long coat, he was stepping (one foot at a time) towards us. We couldn’t even run because his guards, with a Blaster (however more powerful), were behind us.     “Hello, my warriors. I am General Kudlak. Kudlak announced, “You have been teleported to Pandora, to kill all my enemies.” Me and all my friends (well, I just met them) panicked. We panicked so much that Luke had fainted. Standing back up, he said, “Ahmmmmm! We are not soldiers. We’re going home! Come on everyone!” Pushing all guards to the side, we trotted around the Pandora. wondering how to get out, we were getting petrified every minute, just thinking someone is spying on us. If someone was spying on us, then who was it….

CHAPTER FIVE

Suspiciously, sitting down under a vast tree, I was gazing at the eyes of a monator. Coming towards us, the monator gnarled. With pointy teeth (sharp as a knife), the monator had a slimy face – which was very smelly like garbage in a dustbin. It had a body of a lion (however, much more bigger) and also had people wings  – but could not fly. Roarrr! “Aaaah! Get out of here!” screamed Gen. Running everywhere, we found a speaking tree. “Please help us!” shouted Luke. “Help you! Oh, ok!” announced the speaking tree. Climbing up the bumpy tree, the monator was trying to flap his wings – to fly. Swaying all the branches round and round, the tree chucked us all the way towards the waterfall. Soaking wet, we had got out of the water. Once again, we had been caught by Kudlak – who had been looking for his warriors. What did he want from us?

CHAPTER SIX  

“Get off me!” I screamed at Kudlak. “Bow down to the Queen of warriors,” announced Kudlak. Staring at each other, we were wondering that what was happening. Wooosh! With a big a noise, a computer opened. “Welcome my warriors! You are ready to fight our enemies. We have seen your teamwork. Well done!” Now we were wishing that we hadn’t met each other. Luke was touching some electronic thing and he had a shock. “Luke, are you all right!” Gen screamed, while walking towards him. “Such loyality to each other. You have chosen well Kudlak,” announced the Queen. “Thankyou!” replied Kudlak.

CHAPTER SEVEN

The sun (which was a golden coin) was beaming at the tropical rainforest. Pushing us towards the enemies, we had to fight – eventhough we didn’t want to. We had ran away. As we were running, we found a colossal shuttle craft. Now we had a good chance to get out. Walking up and down, trying to get pass the twigs, we were infront of the shuttle craft. However, the problem was that none of us knew how to actually drive a shuttle craft or how to open and get inside the shuttle craft. ” That’s a start. No one know’s how to open or get inside the shuttle craft,” replied Luke. “I don,t think so! Your not going anywhere,” screamed Kudlak.

CHAPTER EIGHT

“Oh no!” shouted everyone. “What do you want with us? We don’t want to kill your enemies. Why don’t you kill them. You don’t need us!” I announced. “Yes, we do need you! Humans are great warriors.”Kudlak replied. Dragging us all the way to their enemies, we were petrified. “It is time for the war to begin,”announced Kudlak, “Let the battle begin!” Now, for three whole years we have been fighting their enemies, thinking that one day, one day, we will get teleported back to earth. All this time, we have been wondering about all the feelings that our families had. Maybe one day, we might go back to our comfy home….

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4 Comments for this entry

  • Carys

    I love your story Saleha! It’s all amazing!!

  • Mrs Skinner

    Oooo Saleha! You have left an opening for another instalment or a ‘sequel’ to this amazing story. Have you thought about extending it? Excellent work!

  • Mr G

    Oh no Saleha, what have you done!? Here am I with a pile of reading I need to do, yet your story captured my attention and drew me in. (Shh, don’t say anything, but it’s probably Mr M’s fault). There’s adventure, excitement, tension … and humour! I love it! I also want to know what happens next; are there more chapters? Perhaps a second book? Or do I have to use my imagination and dream up my own ending?

    Can I ask a question though? The word ‘chucked’ is one I use all the time when I’m speaking, but I’ve always wondered whether it’s OK to write it down. What do you think?

    If you ever publish a book don’t forget to let us all know if it’s as exciting as this one.

  • Mr Woods

    Saleha, your work is fantastic as is the work of your peers, wonderful to read. You are lucky to have a very clever teacher who can put all of this together. I’m going to share this with the Year 6 pupils at my school and show them how hard you are all working. Well done, and keep up the amazing work!
    Chorlton Park Primary School

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