My Pandora story. (By Fern)
by pandora on Feb.08, 2011, under Literacy, Stuff
It was the smae old day, boring, so miserable. I sat in the corner of the depressing classroom . The teacher was yapping on about how to do this and how to do that. I looked around and every one seemed intrested! The teacher had very short grey hair with one clip in to hold her fringe back. Here tight clothes were clinging on her like a baby monky. She wore high heels that were black and her sharp glasses looked at me with a terrifying look. I took a glance out side. The mist was covering the whole school like a blanket, trying to suffacate it. Huge trees waiting for something exciting to happen. The eary sky as grey as the lead in my pencil. Rain falling because it doesn’t have anything else to do. The poor grass getting viscously pushed from side to side in the ghastly wind. I got my book out, and started to read… I fell asleep.
When I woke up I could feel the cold air smothering my skin.Pain struck me first like a lighting bolt. I looked up, collosal roots hanging on trees like a monkey tail The trees where the biggist thing Iv’e ever seen. It was still grey, damp and dark, it looked like they just had a storm! A huge moon twirling round the planet that I was on. the was an eagle like hawk circleing the sky. The sky was just starting to turn blue… BRIGHT blue! At the side of me was a magnificent , golden box, that shimmering in the golden sunlight. On the side of this box, was a fragial piece of paper on this was a posh printed writing
I read it out “try your very best , if you go on this quest, if you dont you wont return to the North west.
I opened up the golden box, inside was a glistening , sharp sword. Something inside me felt really strange feeling in my stomach. I clapsed the sword in my hands it was slightly heavy! I clamped the sword on to the moddle of my belt at my side.
rapidly, I was just about to jump up into the air when peering at me was a body as black as the night sky, which made his two blood thirsty eyes stand out like suns from outer space.
As quick as a teradactapoid could fly, I ran up to the animal, I wasn’t going to back down if this ment home. I knew roughly what to do but I didn’t want to. I took a stepped foward, the animal was peering at me with its two eyes which made me slightly nervous. the animal knew that I was a threat, It stretched to its hind legs standong as tall as the tallest tree on Earth. I held my sword high and proud, the beast jumped down and as quick as a flash I slashed the horn of this terrifying beast. OWWWWWWWW !!!!! the animal howled an fell to the ground with a horrific thud that shook the ground.
With guilt I sadly walked away, I placed the horn into my pocket, regreting everything I just did, I tried to think happy thoughts.. home…home…home..
Moments later, I started to feel really tired , I slowly crept up an abandend tree an peered into the distance….
When I woke up It was like I was on a different planet. The whole place had come alive. It was a mythical place with unique animals. Flowers sitting very tranquil waiting to be picked. Many strange things lie in the atmospher underneath the canopy. Green, blue yellow every colour is seen in the world of Pandora. The immense animals shimmering in the silver of the moon. A huge water fall trickeling waiting to reach the bottom. Rivers shimmering in the glow of small bugs from up above. Colossal animals flyin gin the sky, watching what goes on beneath them like a hawk. Suprisingly there was a diminutiv edoor in the background.
All of a sudden, something grabbed my shoulder, lots of things have gone on between from when I got here an know, I had no idea what this could be. My heart was bouncign in and out of my chest. I wanted to scream but terror reached my voice before I made it. What would it be? I turned around as slow as a snail, to find myself peering at a nine to ten foot tall beast. The huge silloughette towered above me. please not another fight…
”Errm.. Hhello0” I stuttered. I was trying to act normal but I was to scared to be normal.
I thought it was a girl it defanatley looked it.
”Dont be scared, I wont eat you” She joked.
I managed to peep a smile.
She seemed nice, I wanted to ask two questions, Where was I and can I get home ?
”Can I get home?” I muttered.
”yes you can, but you have to stay here for a while, my speices are trying to find a way for you to get home we think we know a way, but it isn’t ready yet.”
” How did you know that I was here?” I asked bewildered.
So, me and Andrexia (that was her name spent the whole day making a tent to sleep in. One more day till I can go home.
The mornign after, the other blue Navves came over and told me that I could go home! The took me up to the most dazzaling sight. It was a door the door was steal and very very heavy to open. There was patterns on the side. Was this like my front door?
”Are you ready? ”
” Yes I’m ready”
I opened the door, It was just totally dark.
” Are you sure that this my way home” I asked
”Yes” the whole Navee tribe answered all at the same time!
I took one step into the door then the other foot. I fell with a shok , all went quiet…
February 17th, 2011 on 9:21 am
I like your story Fern.
February 14th, 2011 on 7:27 am
Thankyou for the comment , I hope that I can write like that more DEFANATLEY !
February 12th, 2011 on 6:02 pm
This is an enthralling piece Fern. You have really planned it well so it flows beautifully. You have really engaged the reader (me) & I want to know what happens next so you have ‘hooked’ me! Well done!