My Pandora Report – By Fern
by David Mitchell on Mar.01, 2011, under Stuff
Pandora is a mysterious world of wonder and beauty. It is filled with mythical things from day and night, now matter which way you look, at it, it is gorgeous. Pandora is one of the m,any moons orbiting the planet Polifinus. It is a gas giant the size of Saturn. If you take one breath from the toxic atmosphere that lies in Pandora, that can suffocate you in seconds There is beauty in everything even the most frighting things.
Appearance
The world of Pandora is a mythical place with unique animals. Flowers sitting tranquil waiting to be picked Many strange things lie beneath the atmosphere of the canopy. Green, blue,red, every colour is seen in the world of Pandora. The collosal animals shimmer in the silver of the moon. A huge water fall wiating
Night time appearance
At night, everything glows its comes alive. Things start to move, animals start to be seen. The humanoid navees start to walk about at night. The rives shimmer in the light of the glistening of the shimmering moon.
Dangerous animals.
Deadly yet magnificent animals live in the world of Pandora, such as the Horseypod a 6 metre tall horse. The thick skimmed hammer head that scatter through the forest for the if prey and will be viscous if they never get it.
Friendly animals.
Glowing bugs that float across the crystal clear water. Eagle like hawks that circle through the sky and come down for you to stroke their heads. Many animals lie beneath the canopy of pandora.
March 9th, 2012 on 10:25 am
Hi Fern,
I think this is a lovely piece of writing.
I like the way you have described the world of Pandora and the imaginative words used – I have a clear picture in my mind of what would await for me if I were to visit this place. I would love to know more about the animals that live in Pandora with more descriptive detail or perhaps could you inform us of any other animals or people that live in Pandora. Keep up the good work!
March 9th, 2012 on 10:21 am
Hi Fern, I am a student teacher at roehampton univrsity. I love the way you use the words ‘mysterious’,'wonder’ and ‘beauty’ to describe Pandora, using these describing words made we want to read your work straight away. The layout of your writing is very dramatic which makes it even more interesting to read. One thing i would recommend is to check you work for full stops (paragraph 2). You should be very proud of your work, well done.
March 14th, 2011 on 10:14 am
Dear Fern, I love the word crystal clear water It makes me feal calm and elegant